UPDATED FOR SECOND EDITION 2012 PUBLICATIONBOOK AVAILABLE NOW !! --> [link]Final Book Cover for what has been known as "Jack Hare's Story"
To be continued with literature and illustration by yours truly. All Tortoise & Hare stuff can be found here--> [link]
Again I want to thank everyone so much for all of the wonderful and helpful feedback through the Work in Progress. This was put in color tonight during a livestream session and I also want to thank the folks that hung out to watch
There are still things that may be fixed and changed with this, but for the most part, it's done.
The composition is supposed to flow in a backwards "C", The emphasis does jump to Tortoise first but with respect to the title having him mentioned first....it makes sense. Jack is still a very prominent figure in the balance and exposes his charm & attitude with his confident smile.
Having too much atmosphere really just made things messy. That's why I've kept it more simple and clean.