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First full color digital with the Intuos 3.
Haha for once I haven't used the element of line.
I wanted to create a soft, classic look this time around.

:star: UPDATE: Nose fix and smoothing the contours around the skin.

'Tis a self protrait- inspired by my attire at my 2007 high school prom. I love the 20's look, and if I absolutely have to be in a dress, it has to be a halter top- because I love that style :giggle:

and yes, I'm a Virgo and proud to be one :boogie:

Now that I'm done farting around with a tablet, It's on to commissions :1#:


Photoshop 7 hours
Textures by ~darkiTexture

Critiques


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This is really beautiful- I can't believe I haven't seen it before. :o It caught my eye when your fancy portfolio folder was swapping through thumbs.

It's SO HARD to get a mix between realism and something stylistic, and you've nailed it here. The hair and eyes look great, I love how they stand out so much being that they're so...dark and crisp in comparison, but that works- it gives the viewer a nice focal point. And in pictures like this, the face should be the focal point!

I'm loving the blue highlights as well- the shading is flawless. The area on the neck and lips where the light hits looks amazing. I also really like the long neck.

My only crit, after looking at this for ages, is the left [viewer's right] boob. The shading makes it look an odd shape and too high. But that's just me nitpicking, I had to really look to find something to crit. XD I don't like using this box unless I have some "negative" feedback to balance it out!

And and 1920s YES. I love that era too. I love how the pose and facial expression in this really...fits the 20s atmosphere.

Some of my closest friends are Virgos! Which by a starsign standard is really, really weird- I'm an Aries. :giggle:

Awesome work.
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I agree with Canytre on practically everything he says. I would, however, like to add a couple of suggestions that are little things I've noticed.

Here I go. Everything from the flower pattern on your dress and the obvious real-like glow you give to the dress is simply exquisite. Your gold necklace looks wonderful. The lips, the texture and color of the hair are simply amazing! The color bone -- almost everything is wonderful.

What I did notice is that you should probably smooth out the color on the bridge of the nose and up to the forehead a tiny bit. You can see the edge of the brush you used. I also think that your overall lighting is a bit to dark for this piece. Perhaps a bit more yellow glow? Then again, I may just be a little picky. It struck me as a tad to dark for both the theme and the style.

Overall, though, it is exquisite. I know that I can't do anything like this, but hey, I'm a writer. That's where I do what I do. :D
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Love it!

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~I'm not perfect. I'm not a beauty queen. I'm just me. My first act of treason was picking up a pen. My first act of love was finding myself again. I am made of pages, paragraphs and inspirations.~
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Thanks! :D

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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
:iconcsnyder:
love the era, lovely work, so elegant:hug:
:iconbloodshotproductions:
You're welcome!

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~I'm not perfect. I'm not a beauty queen. I'm just me. My first act of treason was picking up a pen. My first act of love was finding myself again. I am made of pages, paragraphs and inspirations.~
:iconsplatterpaint-toons:
Wonderful style, so smooth!

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Time you could be spending...eating pie.
:iconkarliashi:
ah this is awesome! I love that 20's era look. I love the design on the dress! The lighting is amazing :)

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*karliashi is :flagcanada:
:iconephilli:
Beautiful! Looks like you had a killer dress for Prom! XD

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"Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." -Henry Van Dyke
:icondelya:
Holy cow, the stylization here is super awesome man! Really love the colors, too. Definitely has that classic look to it. C: Sorry I'm not much for critiquing things, seeing as this is better than any self portrait I could fart out. XD

FABULOUS. *stamps your forehead with an A+*

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"Did you see his arms? They were like legs!"
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Absolutely impressive.
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Thank you :heart:

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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age

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