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5 Days A Week: Smells Week 1

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Okay, so I am beginning to take some hot advice from `misskittyoooo when it comes to overall presentation of this comic. I changed some of the dialogue and I also included a title panel to establish the setting and get more acquainted with the characters.

Many of you made it a point that poses look a bit stiff. I'll admit, maybe having some more variation in Mr. Hollingsworth's body language will aid this. I am currently working on tweaking panel 5.

How would a Facepalm for panel 5 work? :iconfacepalmplz: :lol:

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:iconhmmurdock:
I would give back some feed back but I can't read it and DA is being a but and won't show the full image size. :(

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Well. I don't like the font, looks like yelling.
But other than that, it's good.

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:iconfriedenmann:
Has real Mr. H-worth seen it?

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not yet... But I can't wait to show him!

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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
:iconkatmomma:
give it an hour or so :D

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Marilyn Cole
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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
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XD most of it is yelling. Thanks so much for the feedback! :hug: I'll play around with some more fonts. :nod:

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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
:iconfriedenmann:
Is he ok with this kind of jokes? I guess I would have a court case if I joked about one of my teachers this way...

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XD I did this to him before. and his exact reaction :laughing: He's cool with it.

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Marilyn Cole
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Yes! :lol: It does spark my interest :nod:

I think the progression is wonderful, and the expressions on the characters keep getting better and better from one frame to the next.

A fantastic attempt :)

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Katie Franke
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This is pretty awesome and funny! I love all of the expressions, except for the one on the girl's face in the very first panel. It looks more like and angry expression than an 'oh, crap, I'm caught!' expression. I kinda like the font, but then again it might be a bit too loud. 'Cuz the guy in the last panel isn't shouting.

Other than that, I thought it was great!

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