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5 Days A Week: Smells Week 1
Okay, so I am beginning to take some hot advice from `misskittyoooo when it comes to overall presentation of this comic. I changed some of the dialogue and I also included a title panel to establish the setting and get more acquainted with the characters. Many of you made it a point that poses look a bit stiff. I'll admit, maybe having some more variation in Mr. Hollingsworth's body language will aid this. I am currently working on tweaking panel 5. How would a Facepalm for panel 5 work? GRAYSCALE VERSION: [link] |
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August 29, 2008
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Well. I don't like the font, looks like yelling.
But other than that, it's good.
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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
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Marilyn Cole
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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
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Marilyn Cole
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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
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5 Days A Week: the Everyday Adventures of the School Age
I think the progression is wonderful, and the expressions on the characters keep getting better and better from one frame to the next.
A fantastic attempt
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Other than that, I thought it was great!
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